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I think it is very nice trying. I read your English. I thought something wrong. Thus, I try to improve. Please ask Saruta for further improvement. I have time to check 3 sentences so far. I am sorry if there are still mistake.

-- (original) If the creator has given permission to you, when your works is complete, please send e-mail to him, write a word of thanks.

Him is not good. There is a possibility of Her. It may better to separate into 2 centences since the grammer is complicated. If, When,,

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If the original creator give you the permission to use, please send e-mail to the creator to acknowledge.

(original) When you publish to the Internet your finished works, please write a word of thanks to the creator of an original works there. Please write the following: In addition to it. URL of original works. The name of the original works. The name of the original crea

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When you publish your works to the Internet, please write an acknowledgement to thank original works of the creator.

In addition, please write the following: URL of original works, The name of the original works, The name of the original creator.

acknowledgement (謝辞）

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